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Poem Number 1627
with breaking dawn
the rainbow hem of Night
slips over hills
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a jet
tears the blue
silk sky
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robbynl, exceptional.. that second verse is superb, thank you.......alice..
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Bravo. Progressive minimalism, saying less and less ... good stuff. --eritain
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Thank You Ma'am, and you Master Eritain ...robbynl
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