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Poem Number 1610
watch over Eden
so it shall burn if you don't
and never recur
Commentary:
uhm, i should have written "for" it shall burn (2. line) oh well... ___vic
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hmmm, i really liked "so" (read "as if")
but that does change the focus a bit ...robbynl
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