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Poem Number 1519
late in the evening
i watch you do mundane things
still so beautiful


Commentary:
late in the evening
content with you by my side
ordinary life.........cecily
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ordinary life
fulfills my deep desires
with you by my side......zendo
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by his side I stand
even though he's never here
and I am lonely.....cecily
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if poetry were dancing this is what it would look like......~mela
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your imagery of dancing is just as beautiful, mela....cecily
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