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Poem Number 1511
Fisherman dozes
His dreams rolling far beyond
Blue-green horizons
Commentary:
the sleeper travels
ancient dreams in mystic haze
the dreamer awakes.......rubyredldy
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..A.., Basho would be proud. Here is one of his that is similar:
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Sick on a journey--
over parched fields
dreams wander on
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"In a sense, requested as it was by disciples as he lay on his deathbed in Osaka, this is Basho's death poem. It is unquestionably the last poem he ever wrote." (from On Love and Barley)
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Nice work ..A.. and rrl. -thayne
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I have one book on English Haiku writers and I am hounding my local library to get some bona fide stuff.. Thanks for your comments thayne, I really appreciate them..A..
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