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Poem Number 1494
'70 duster
the eight track and the bong-
her feet on the dash
Commentary:
'66 chevy
up in smoke interior
back seat occupied........39
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Saab 93
roach in the ashtray
freewheelin' .......RAS
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(damn, how'd that extra syllable get in line 1?? Must have crawled in from the
ashtray...RAS, shamefaced)
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'83 Capri
singing with the radio
Edge of Seventeen.........Cecily
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'81 Mustang--
the weight of our love
puts a dent in the hood
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(what can I say, I am the Ghost of Chris Farley)
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blue grey impala
8 tracks held in with duct tape
off to the drive in......zendo
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oh man, the memories, the cars, the ladies, 8 tracks, the roaches, the hand-cuffs(i mean duct tape), and of course the drive inn.(extra n intentional)......39
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Hmmmmmmm....did I know you back then, 39? Sounds awfully familiar....cecily
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you guys are alright,these were fun......sketch
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well,Cecily, that depends, started in '76 'til well
i guess still is what i mean. hmmmmm maybe too much information in one sentence.................39
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oooooooh, stop now, 39...and I'll still respect you in the morning...LOL...cecily
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