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Poem Number 1468
New moon brings dark nights
the swamp, alive with creep sounds
dancing glow of haints
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Your original use of language is appealing! Clever, woven well. Lida Jo
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Thank you Lida Jo. somehow, the term "hypergolic swamp gas"
doesn't make much sense on a dark night... robbynl
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i dunno i think hypergolic swamp gas is kinda sexy......zendo
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hmmm, think i see what you mean. thats what my mathmatics prof
used to breath when i called her "Atilla the Hunny" ;O) rl
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LOL.....zendo
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