one hundred worms
steam rising from wet tar
the smell of dirt

"Huh?"-Note to myself;
In search of inspiration,
cross out bourbon..........sketch
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oh I don't know - each line is a pretty compelling image (I esp. like the middle
one), & taken together are kind of surreal. In a dreamlike way, I see earthworms
on the sidewalk after a rainstorm...RAS
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Hey sketch:
You mean, you might have said:
one hundred worms
steam rising from wet tar
bourbon's aftermath......LM

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hey LM-too bad it wasn't tequila (one of those smiley things)
RAS-thanks bud-you are alright-ya nailed it in spite of myself-
that's where i was going but i could have taken a straighter route.
sketch
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Great imagery! I like the last line calling to all that is underneath the
tar. Great picture. Lida Jo