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Poem Number 1457
the sound of leaves
as her car is disappears......
autumn chill
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Er....let's try that again:
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the sound of leaves
as her car disappears...
autumn chill
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I like it - Things are more effective when one has to use one's imagination. I can feel the emotional chill...LM
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Me, too. Wonderful comment, LM. Lida Jo
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