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Poem Number 1450
autumn dusk--
rain slicked streets glisten
beneath the stray dog's paws
Commentary:
autumn dusk descends
streetlights run on rain-slicked streets
to pools of darkness
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autumn dusk descends
streetlights run on rain-slicked streets
to pools of darkness
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Don't know how I got this in twice! Could change that last line to:
"to glistening pools"
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Collaboration of highest quality. I love it. Lida Jo
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