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Poem Number 1438
I have a secret
i'll give you a little hint
(It's about your eyes.)
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thanks for continuing the mystery...L..M
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I don't think there is any really ... a façade of mystery, but I think the flirtatious tone pretty much gives it away. (Then again, I may have created that flirtatious tone as much as detected it. What else could it be? Nervous, I guess, or attempting to induce paranoia....) It was a good setup; kudos to the other builders. --eritain
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