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Poem Number 1436
over on your side
make that familiar spoon
love's habit, sweet dreams.


Commentary:
'spoon'?????....LM
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cradled together
under-cover lovers spoon
content now to dream.....39
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OH! if you meant 'pitching woo' why didn't you say so?...L..M
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unintentionally obscure LM. my love and i sleep on our sides
fit together "like spoons in a drawer". maybe restricted to
the deep south dialect? ...robbynl
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Dense, or what? I'm wrong again! I guess I should be used to it by now...L..M
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relax my friend.I've lived all over the country, and every time i've
moved there's been a new language to learn.who knows? maybe the 'net
will change that...rl
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born and raised in N.Y- moved to GA eight years ago and still haven't learned the entire southern dictionary. spooning i've heard up and down the east coast though....39

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hey 39,where in ny?
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Long Island.....39
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spooning is done in Michigan, too. hehe ~Quiche~
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