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Poem Number 1434
A place deep inside
Where martyrs weep lone tears, and
Angles play with sin
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Oh My! This is fine...thank you Ma'am
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thank you very much. I will assume that you are "rl" since he/she is the only one to address me as such. If I'm wrong sorry.....m4r
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you're right, i forget to sign comments,
and robbyn is ambiguous, my Julia just calls me Rob.
' read this verse several times, it really spoke to me
thanks again ...
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I'm glad you liked it.Thanks agin....moon4rent
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Martyrs and lost angels - a telling combination. Nicely wrought. PG
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I like this, but i really love the last line m4r, good work :)......rubyredldy
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thanks again....m4r
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