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Poem Number 1423
His eyes--his mother's
Too--mirror mine-- I start to
Get their sad humor
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wow, I don't know what it is about this one that grabs me so - maybe that suggestion
of shared tragic legacy. A very subtle, deep tableaux here, I think. -RAS
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Such a way with words, a story teller in 17 syllables. PG
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