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Haiku - Five
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Poem Number 1399
left with these choices
would choose no other but you
seek alternatives
Commentary:
would choose none other than you would fit better...m4r
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intriguing ambiguity in line 2... I assumed a semicolon after "no(ne) other",
but moving the punctuation to the end of the line would put a completely different
spin on it... -RAS
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