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Poem Number 1273
looking through your skin
moistening my lips to drink
No wine is sweeter
Commentary:
ripely beckoning
your sweetness envelops me
drowning in nectar
......rubyredldy
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become part of me
quench my thirst with your sweetness
savor every drop.........zendo
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I thought there was a ban on drop savoring in here.39
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im a well known scofflaw........zendo
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hmmm? where did I see that statement before?......Sue Wallow
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Is that all we do here is savour drops?
~O~ Coyote ~O~
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Ask Sue, I think she's keeping tabs on the flow of things here....39
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What's flowing now? Do we get to savour every last drop?
~O~ Coyote ~O~
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this seems to have turned ugly I'm sorry for ever have written the dumb thing....m4r
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