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Poem Number 1225
Feel the wind of time
chill tired bones, sting weakened eyes
yet still fly my kite


Commentary:
an elegy from one on the eve of his 2nd half-century... please feel free
to repost this afresh if that's not the direction you wanted to go... -RAS

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I like this direction..A..
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RAS: Happy Birthday when it creaps over the horizon. Hey! but 50 isn't
so bad. Think of all the things you don't have to do this time- cut teeth,
learn to walk, catch a girl--well--mayyyyybe. --Another Virgo?
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Thanks! A Taurus, actually. Yeah, I wouldn't want to face high school again...
or first broken heart... first full-time job... first marriage (oops, too much data) -RAS
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Old male silverback
Counting scars in flesh and soul:
Proud of every one. -RAS (they're my Purple Hearts!)
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RAS forgot to sign as Virgo--GrandmaThing May you know much love and
many, healthy years.
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