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Poem Number 1219
when hearts are empty
as breezy hills , then sometime
look up at the stars
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TT63, or is it 64!, great beginning line. Love the way anon ended it .Nice stuff here, take a bow.....DRQ
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Thanks, DRQ! It was 64 on the 12th. Still going but not strong.-
GrandmaThing-May you know love, for many years to come.
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