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Poem Number 1195
Life brings gratitude
to those who are left behind
to breath the fresh air.
Commentary:
Anon: Using "to" first word line two, would it change the meaning if
you changed "to" first word line three to breathing? You would have right no.
of syllables without repeating.--GrandmaThing--May you know love.
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Grandma Thing.......are you an
english teacher.....?
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educated but never got opportunity to teach--Too much surgery.However,
I discovered the one thing I did well in--learning.GT--may you know love.
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