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Poem Number 1188
If only you knew
What was running through my mind
In old muddy shoes


Commentary:
Incredible!! Wonderful set up, DRQ, and an ending only Bakai could write.
Absolutely perfect. Bakai, it is sooooo lovely to see your name again.
You and your work have been actively missed. Lida Jo
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I'll second both of those, Lida Jo-Big Sis--Li'l Sis GrandmaThing
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..muddy shoes
..leaving dirty tracks
..from sources
..........TT63--May you know love!
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the footprints you left
in the bare sands of my heart
wont be windswept soon......zendo
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Love this Zendo, as usual(BIG sigh)You write em so well....DaRedQueen
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Oh man! That is golden-age IPP right there. So good to read a Bakai again at last. Here's one for ((Bakai)), and another for (((the whole gang of ya))). --eritain
(Oh, hey, Lida? It's safe to venture into the 2, 3, and 4 salons again. They've cleaned up, and your voice is badly missed. -e, temporarily no longer from Marysville but from Utah)
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