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Poem Number 1182
Once where willows bloomed
Now cattails dip to savour
Sips of morning dew.
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Excellente, I get the image of the plants and somehow of a kitten taking a cool morning drink. mew mew
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Right on!! - I was looking at the irrigation pond where the pussy willows
bloomed in the spring and now the rushes are plumping out their heads.
Thank you for picking out the kittens. PG
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