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Poem Number 1179
when you smile at me
It's like I'm in a half-dream
touch me and its whole
Commentary:
Wonderfully elegant. Great understatement, very evocative. Lida Jo
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DRQ::I saw this but couldn't think of a good "capper", I was sure some
body had it. You did it so refined.--GrandmaThing--Swell haiku, all.
may you know love.
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