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Poem Number 1155
Out of fire and tears
Cat ensures the dreams she birthed
Won't evaporate


Commentary:
Anyone see that daring rescue in the papers a few years back? A momma cat runs back into the house more than once to save her younguns and is burned blind in the process. A mother's love knows no boundaries, I know, I have a terrific mom. -Momma's Boy Thayne
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P.S. Terrific starting line! I'll bet a hundred new haiku could grow from it. What's that? Do I hear typing...........
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Out of fire and tears
Comes an urn that will soon hold
A father's ashes
(gcf)
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Oh, gcf, your words make me weep. PG
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out of fire and tears
Vermont town's records were lost
that mean I wasn't born
....GrandmaThing-- My oldest sister lost her original birth certificate.
Being born on my folk's travels, she sent for a copy, only to be told
the court house records were all burned in a fire. We come from big
family and had church records so no problems. May you know love.
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Your story reminded me of my Daddy's woes in the same situation. Court house burned.
No records. "you'll have to find someone who can vouch for the fact that you were born
on your birthdate," the lady told him in all seriousness. And in all seriousness he answered,
"Well, I am pretty sure I was." I just laugh out every time I remember it.
gcf, your Haiku is startling and piercing. An incredible work. Lida Jo
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Alice and Thayne, I didn't speak enough to your original work. When you write something
that sparks this kind of discussion, you know that you have written a worthy work. It
struck deeply and spawned work that matched its eloquence. Lida Jo
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Thank you for your kind words Lida Jo and Thayne,and for the other comments. This is relatively new to me, I love writing, but it's the people that keep me coming back..Alice
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