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Poem Number 1145
Awake, sleeping muse!
Roosters of dawn now taunt me
With their stuttered play.
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gcf::I had entered my line the regular way "submit" then when I saw your line I hit reload & got the second--who can figure.--love anyhow.
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gcf, how would you have finished your poem? And Anon, what would you have written
had the 'puter not glitched? I dearly love the two lines you wrote, having been taunted
by the roosters of dawn (though that wasn't what the menfolks called them when they had to
awaken) and I love "stuttered play", it is so perfect to describe a rooster. Enviable lines. Lida Jo from Idaho
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Awake, sleeping muse!
Lift the fog from this brain and
Give me clarity
(gcf)
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gcf, please post this Haiku, it deserves its day in boldface. We all feel this.
I don't even believe in muses but, whatever it is inside that lets us write, to
that I have many a time just these thoughts - only not near so eloquently. Lida Jo
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