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Poem Number 1127
Yesterday
.....
Autumn's labor lay
Freckled by wet mounds of hay
comtemplating rain.
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Today
.....
This bold autumn day
Is equal to the sum of
Hours to turn hay.
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Second thoughts:
Autum's labor lay
blemished as that dampened hay -
Bootless in the rain.
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