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Haiku - Five


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Poem Number 1125
forever passes
beneath our upturned noses
scatologically


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hey, this is some good shit. does "scatologically" count as 5 syllables or 6? it doesn't matter though, this is some good shit.
Mikey Likey

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Great collaboration. I agree with ML that the sylable count is irrelevant here.
It is a well honed poem. Lida Jo from Idaho
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