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Haiku - Five


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Poem Number 1115
Sunlight filters in
Stirring motes of memory -
Dreams take flight again.


Commentary:
Such great opening lines stir the blood and get the fingers typing.
Inspiration's fire
begins within the spark of
Thayne's beginning lines.
PG

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Shoot - I goofed. Third line should probably read:
Thayne's unfettered lines. PG

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LOL on your sig. PG, and I am honored to have finally made it into someone's haiku. How would you feel if I fed one of these to that grumpy old dog down the street? (with proper credit of course) In partic, "spring's promise" which strums a wonderful chord, as do the others.
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Go for it. PG
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Oh, I wish I had written such an image as sunlight stirring motes of memory. Incredible. Lida Jo
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Don't stop "starting" and "finishing". You two think so well together.
___GrandmaThing--May you know love.
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