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Poem Number 1094
back in fifty-nine
roe hadn't yet met wade and
i breathe in-and out
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sketch, this is profound. So succinct and understated. I love it. Lida Jo
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thanks,lj,...a little ditty titled,'dad would give mrs mischler a ride to work'.
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back in fifty-nine
the law of the land inspired
coat hanger justice.
Jellyroll
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hey jelly-oops-didnt really intend for this political-saw it as something more
personal-am pro choice about everything in life-believe that everyone should
have the freedom/responsibility to improve or destroy themselves...Considering
the circumstances surrounding my conception and birth,both of my parents married
to other people,my father was 44,his family grown and out of the house,my
mother with five kids between the ages of 3 and 11,I figure I had better
odds in '59 than in '99.This is more of a sigh of relief,"i breathe in-and out"
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