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Poem Number 1085
framed by misted glass
she looks beyond to see him
walking through the snow
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wow! this turned out great.had a whole different image when i started but i like this better...thanks to both of you....zendo
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my breath fogs the glass
watching out the window for
you to return home......Blue Swan
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trudging through the snow
i am warmed by thoughts of your
passion heated breath............zendo
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