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Poem Number 1069
stopped by a river
but if I DID jump, who'd look
after my puppy?
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Water, water, cold and deep
Hold me fast that I may sleep
For death with you shall be no more
Than all the little deaths before
(I read this in a book, can't remember which one...anyway, it's nice, so...)
'*~Neon
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...but he couldn't love anyone the way he loves you. Stick around for him
and us, we can always use another "friend".--GrandmaThing--May you know love.
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Nothing, and Nobody, is worth your life. Sullen
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