Echoes of silent
dreams, haunt my need for silence
In my waking head

I really like this one. The capping line abrupt, surprising. I wonder if you
could evoke silence with another word or image in the second line? It might make
it more powerful yet. Might not, too. I love 'echoes of silent dreams' - so many
of our dreams stay silent. I want so to give mine voice. Your poem touched me in
a guarded spot. Lida Jo from Idaho