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Poem Number 1913
warmth touches my neck
---auntie m
tingles stir along my arms
---Anonymous
brown eyes melt my heart
---Anonymous
I feel complete here with you
---Anonymous
times between us dear
---kraiden
moments with you void of fear
---kraiden
truth is a method
---kraiden
and your eyes are blue
---Anonymous

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hyperhaiku
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Poem Number 1915
Intense dark blue eyes
---Anonymous
Glance at me then dart to left
---Anonymous
Contact sport "Check Mate"
---Anonymous
~Carabelle~
---Anonymous

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so much in so little
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Poem Number 1916
Side B blank vinyl
---Anonymous
New beginning gives to us
---BR, New Hampshire
Chance to live again
---BR, New Hampshire

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Commentary:
let's get back to the basics of love.
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"lukenbach, texas" ~carabelle~
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Poem Number 1917
how does it feel
---Anonymous
to be adored as you are
---Anonymous
just a lust object
---Anonymous

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Poem Number 1918
This life is finite
---Anonymous
Learn to number well the days
---BR
Then, eternity
---BR

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Poem Number 1921
Perfect clarity
---Anonymous
Brand new package of lens cloths
---BR
Oh! Scratched my glasses!
---BR

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Commentary:
wiped them so nicely
when he knocked them in the mud
should have just rinsed 'em
.
Yeah, this happened to me. Left me with two scratches intersecting right in front of my right eye. And the perp was a glasses-wearer who should have known better. Sigh. --eritain
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Poem Number 1922
Explode together
---Anonymous
Sacrifice for God's glory
---Anonymous
Paradise awaits
---Anonymous

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Commentary:
futile
league with Death
dissolves
.
ar-Rahman
blessed the innocents
but cursed you
.
--eritain
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Poem Number 1923
Say "Elementary
---Anonymous
my dear Watson" & you
---Anonymous
become Sherlock Holmes
---Anonymous

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Poem Number 1924
this might be a trap
---Anonymous
the sweet kisses from your lips
---BR
rush to take the bait
---BR

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Poem Number 1925
At the age of twelve
---Anonymous
A boy naïve. At eighteen
---Anonymous
Already ancient.
---eritain

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Poem Number 1927
Interaction of
---Anonymous
all our rough protruding souls --
---eritain
mutual smoothing.
---eritain

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Commentary:
It is isn't it. Well said. c-belle
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Poem Number 1928
Geriatric Bob
---Anonymous
pants more than fashion statement
---carabelle
cosmetology
---anonamouse

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Poem Number 1929
downtown lanterns swing
---Anonymous
dragons dance in china town
---carabelle
myst'ries of the Orient
---BR

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Poem Number 1930
Natty professor
---Anonymous

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Poem Number 1931
You want a wager?
---Anonymous
go ahead punk, toss the coin
---anonwhatever
with the shiny edge.
---eritain

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Commentary:
got shined up
in a funny way
now you know
.
--eritain
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Poem Number 1932
Unleash the voices
---Anonymous
Strip away the ties that bind
---BR
Freedom's song shall rise
---BR

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Poem Number 1933
Cavils, caveats,
---Anonymous
cockamamie confessions;
---eritain
confuse cautious cops
---BR

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Poem Number 1934
one lapsang souchong
---Anonymous
one chai on the boulevard
---vin
one punjabi. Now !
---carabelle

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Poem Number 1935
I can hear music
---Anonymous
when you walk into the room
---Anonymous
hypnotic "sleepwalk"
---carabelle

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Poem Number 1936
brightwhitesnowtreescape
---Anonymous
glitters like diamonds in sun
---carabelle
skiing madonna
---carabelle

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Poem Number 1941
if only I knew
---eritain
so many daisy petals
---carabelle
daisies ought to tell
---BR

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Poem Number 1942
if ever a word
---eritain
there was to be weary of,
---eritain
"no" would be the one
---eritain

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Poem Number 1943
classic "Little Bird"
---Anonymous
cruised Modesto Strip all night
---Anonymous
then "He" went away
---carabelle

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Commentary:
third line should have been "then he flew away"
c-belle
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Poem Number 1944
midsummer night's dream
---Anonymous
top sheet snares round my ankle
---c-belle
who's pulling my leg
---BR

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Commentary:
never duel with a top sheet. they mean business.
maybe I read the sheet wrong?
like your third line.
It's fun working with you.
c-belle
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Nice collab, you three! --eritain
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Thase first lines are like a springboard. Satisfaction in seeing where we can go with an idea.
...Br
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Poem Number 1945
so you like skittles
---anonwhatever
kill your TV, start really
---eritain
tasting a rainbow
---eritain

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Commentary:
good in vodka, or...on their own.
I'll pass on the rainbow.
enjoyed! c-belle
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Poem Number 1946
kicked from Wimbledon
---eritain
(they did not share my views on
---eritain
what the world needs now)
---eritain

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Commentary:
oh those stuffy brits
what do they know
funny haiku. c-belle
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by now they should have
ironic distance from sport
seems otherwise though
.
-eritain
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Poem Number 1947
it hasn't been long
---eritain
or have I lost track of time
---vin

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Commentary:
it hasn't been long
for so many, many years
you lead. it follows
please forgive me but this is what came to mind when i read the first line.
c-belle
so sorry
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Poem Number 1948
I drank in his books
---carabelle
like on some berrybender
---c-belle
as clear as claret
---c-belle

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Poem Number 1949
dreaming of taurus
---c-belle
seven sisters blazing white
---vin
fleeing orion
---c-belle

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Commentary:
Wow Vin! love that second line of yours.
I see you are up with Greek Myth and astronomy.
Well done. c-belle
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One of the best constellations to observe with any instrument, including binoculars that live in a closet. Mythology - the minds of our ancient parents. Great combination, looking through glass, back in time, and telling the old stories. Tis the season. Soon the Perseid meteors arrive. Thanks. vin
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Poem Number 1950
rinsing black beans
---eritain
they slip through my fingers
---eritain
like caviar
---eritain

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Poem Number 1951
deep in sea garden
---c-belle
sun rays find coral, sea ferns
---vin
and king neptunes smile
---c-belle

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Commentary:
I can see his flowing locks. vin
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You don't want to mess with Old Neptune, that for sure.
Like your second line.
My first and third are just words.
You added color and life to this and I thank you. c-belle
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Collaborators! vin
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