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Poem Number 1892
glimmer and twinkle
the twin starlights that reside
where our smiles meet
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Beautifully evoked image of a kiss, not spoken, just breathed - and ever so lightly at that. Lida Jo from Idaho
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Lida Jo--I wasn't going to comment then I saw my big sis here. This reminded me of my love's words this A.M. on line--"I'm busy removing files so --kiss me s-l-o-w!" GrandmaThing Also saw Eritain and Alice and RBL and Quiche--Wow! Thought I'd never see any of you again.
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