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Poem Number 998
soft and smooth
flesh inviting me
desire
Commentary:
Five jars of urine
arranged in a star-pattern
Why do i do this
...Space cadet
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calling Dr.Freud.....zendo
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you have another one for me zendo?...Dr. Freud
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GROW UP!!!
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get a name!!
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Please don't fight or you will both have to go to your room for time out!....m4r :o}
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Or all of you, which ever....m4r
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ahhh the friendly chit-chat of ku-commentary, i mean if he wants to play with five jars of urine(dont wanna know where he got em) thats his right to do so and i wont let it piss me off............xcalibur
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