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Poem Number 968
You are
the taste of
my tongue
Commentary:
your love lingers
there upon my tongue
sweet memories
~quiche~
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or...
sweet memories
there upon my tongue
your love lingers
~Q~
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you are saying so much more with so much less (I know there's one word that could say that, but can't think of it right now)..I love it, wonderful writing, thank you again....alice
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my oh my, robbynl....well...wow!....love this one....cecily
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Gracious, that's very kind of you! the comments of
such creative folks mean a lot.
Mlle.Quiche, wonderful verse. Thank You ····· robbynl
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your taste lingering
on my tongue, as I long to
drink from you again
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love this last one, .....wish youd sign these...grrrrrrrrrr!!!!!.....zendo
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;)
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Hey, i know this one! ····· robbynl
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LOL...;)
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