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Poem Number 912
lonely dreamer
turns his eyes to the stars
his thoughts to her


Commentary:
lonely dreamer
turns her eyes to the stars
her thoughts to him.........cecily (trying HARD to hold herself back - if this one isn't perfect dancing music, I don't know what is....)
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ok, I'll give it a go
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connected by time
but separated by space
their two hearts converge..........RAS
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as silent tears fall
her arms ache from emptiness
her heart calls to his......cecily
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her song in the wind
her fingers ruffling his hair
his desire inflamed..............RAS
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she closes her eyes
thinks of his arms around her
her desire inflamed.......cecily
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intervening miles
an unbridgeable chasm
fulfillment denied...........RAS
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chasm divides, but
she is content knowing that
her path leads to him......cecily
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translucent dreams
weak beer indeed after
tasting fine wine...........RAS
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mem'ries of his lips,
and of the sweet wine they shared
makes her long for more.....cecily
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harsh reality
versus tender fantasy -
cold gruel or nepenthe?....RAS (apparently into Dilemma today)
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LOL....apparently so, my friend....but I'd opt for nepenthe, myself....cecily
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I think a wee splash of nepenthe would be just the ticket. Jeez, so sorry m'lady, I couldn't seem
to get a handle on this exchange. Not to mix metaphors (a sure sign I'm about to), but I guess my
feet are still sore from #897! Showin' my age....;-) .........RAS
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RAS, you're too cute, and I have the most fun playing with you! Looking forward to our next dance, my friend....much love, cecily....(and I don't know how old you are, but you seem quite ... ummm ... up to par, if you ask me!)
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Cute AND up to par! I should cash in & go home now! I've enjoyed the dances too, even if they've made me a little dizzy sometimes.
(Just so you'll know, I've seen 49 summers come and go.....RAS)
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good grief, RAS, from the way you talked I thought you must be fully 82 by now! You're still a spring chick!.........cecily
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(smile) I don't know about Spring... mid-August, maybe! ....RAS the perhaps-not-so-Elder
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