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Poem Number 893
if left up to me
i'd keep time at a stand, for
ever in my arms


Commentary:
gorgious 39.. so many times I've said "I wish I could stay here forever". Thanks for this one....alice..
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..gorgeous :)
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when i hold her near
letting go takes strength that i
never knew i had.............39(thank-you alice for the kind words)
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39; I never though of letting go as being strong, more as weak. With your words I can see that letting go sometimes takes more power than hanging on. Thanks for the insight....m4r(who is now feels more powerful)
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