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Poem Number 868
forgiveness
it seems elusive
still thinking
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repentance
ducks 'round barriers
most self made
Commentary:
forgiveness
always hides beneath
your ego....zendo
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I can forgive you
or I can forget what was
but not both - you choose........RAS
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I cannot!
that choice must be made
in your heart...
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We forgive,
we repent; angels
envy us.
--eritain, mangling words of Hugh Nibley
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oops mine before e's....alice..
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foolish head
nothing to forgive
heart knew best.....: ) Tessy
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