goddess of beauty
looking up to the heavens
slowly as she spins

Spinning slowly she
Shakes the sequins from her gown
Making the heavens....m4r

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These are beautiful. m4r: I can see the night sky in your haiku and is that the earth spinning DRQ. I was thinking of something a bit different, looking at my cat this morning. She's pretty ugly but it was her expression that made me write this:
Goddess of beauty
beloved of the masses
-cat on fax machine.
..cinnabar

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m4r thats beautiful.....and cinnabar its amazing how cats inspire us
how dare i still sleep
soft taps of your paw tell me
way past breakfast time...........zendo
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cinnabar and DRQ, love your poem. Inspiration for other great ones. M4r I love the image of a sequined sky..beautiful...A..
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Thanks much but the praise goes to each of you who inspires us all in the visions we see in each others work......m4r
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oh by the way DRQ, YES it is the earth, Mother Earth,...m4r
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Loud sustained applause for both heaven and earth in haiku. Wry grins and chuckles for the cats as well. You folks are wonderful! --eritain