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Poem Number 861
beneath your window
listening to the rustle
and hearing you breathe
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alone in the night
hoping for a fleeting glimpse
of my juliet.........zendo
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Wow Zendo, that is beautiful.But of course, its from you.........DRQ
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and inspired by you.....so.....it had to be good my queen......zendo
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;).......DRQ
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ladies and gentlemen the winner of the Haiku voyeur award is.......lol
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oh please, was there ever any doubt??? ;-)
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i can just imagine the heavy breathing and soft whacking noises...oooooooh my juliet....lol
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to quote zendo's daughter.."EEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!"
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hmmmmm...that reminds me im out of calamine lotion.....zendo
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