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Poem Number 856
Leaving the theater,
I found a snow-lit-up world.
Life *is* beautiful.
Commentary:
(And incidentally, the film was grand. If you haven't seen La Vita e Bella, run, don't walk, to the soonest nearby showing. And take a friend.) --erittäin-peculiar
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Love the image of a world lit up with snow.. haven't seen the film yet, but on your say so, I'll be sure to check it out..A..
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I can see it, eritain...sparkling before you....cecily
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It was awesome -- December winter at 11:00 at night, and yet with the snow brightness it was like June at 9. Glad I could share it. -e
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You know, I have read this several times. I really like it. I picture myself walking out of the movies in a long black coat , and just smiling at the world.Eritain, this is beautiful.....DRQ
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and ummmmmm.....whats under the coat DRQ?......zendo( i know..i need help)
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By peculiar coincidence, I was wearing my black trenchcoat at the moment of which this haiku speaks. If you are a long black coat wearer I love you. (Hmm ... "long black coat wearer" ... now *there's* a phrase that would be interesting to misparse.) (And, might I add, if zendo wears long black coats, I'm beginning to get worried 'bout that boy.) -e
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-e, actually it was a long black wool coat(just like the one I own),and the vision didn't show me what was under the coat Zendo, so...... probably a pair of black jeans, and a warm snuggly sweater???............DRQ
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long black coat wearer
spy or vixen in disguise
appealing prospects....m4r
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can we compromise and make it a "snug" sweater?......zendo
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SNUG - GLY = "SNUG" sweater.....DRQ!
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sheesh!.......ok........zendo
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I'm partial to fuzzy myself.....RAS, without looking up from the Cosmo hidden inside his copy
of "Nonparametric Statistical Procedures"
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You are wearing the
Snuggly, Fuzzy red sweater
It’s my favorite....m4r (MERRY CHRISTMAS)
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