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Poem Number 827
Thanksgiving,
friends headed home. Remember
loneliness?
Commentary:
Misproportionate. 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 would be OK, 3-7-3 just doesn't do it.
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A couple friends left
at meals; most are giving thanks
at home, and I'm -- here.
~~~
--eritain
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Extra turkey legs
Shared between the rank and file
A taste of friendship .....m4r
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