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Poem Number 823
Tight little bunny
Escapes my prying hands and
lands soft in my lap
Commentary:
Beautiful story framing: conflict detail, line 1; conflict core, line 2; resolution, line 3. A vertiable microcosm of talespinning. --eritain
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HUH? Thought it was just a child holding a baby bunny and dropped it into their lap
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Well, yes, but even so look at it. I read "tight little bunny / escapes my prying hands" and as far as I can anticipate that bunny is outta there -- bounding off nevermore to be manhandled. But instead, there it is, docile in the grabber's very lap. Tension. Conflict. Crisis. Unexpectedness. Fuzzy Goodness. Sentence Fragments. --eritain
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Explanation appreciated
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man i just missed this whole thing.....i was thinking hugh hefner and the mansion.......zendo
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Wht Zendo, I'm suprised!Missed you!....DaRedQueen
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missed you too my dear friend, great to be back among you......zendo
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