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Poem Number 813
She dances alone
her drums beat differently
lost in her world


Commentary:
she dances alone
whirling in melancholy
pains captive angel.....rubyredldy
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Ooooooohhhhh....reminds me of Captured Angel....one of my favorite songs.
She dances alone
Waiting for him to join her
Knowing that he won't.....Cecily
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she dances alone
lost self free in her own song
as his music plays
-crayola

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She dances alone
he doesn't hear the music
she tries to show him
-Cecily
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He dances alone,
too shy to ask her, but too
self-conscious to stop.....RAS
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i'm dancing alone
singing to my toothbrush and
one dog audience
~mela
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I prefer my hairbrush. I can hold it with both hands.:o}.....m4r
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gracious! this one seems to have opened a well.
these are wonderful verses...rl
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she dances alone
fantasys all thats left her
in their soft white room
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She dances alone
Knowing that he's watching her
Hoping he will join
- Cecily
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she dances
while the music plays
he listens
-k
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He dances alone
with his ego while she is
out dancing elsewhere
...cinnabar
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What a wonderful outpouring of poems this has sparked. A true interaction between you all. Very nice to see all of them....m4r
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she dances alone
her love swaying in time with
each heartbeat I live..............39
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she dances alone
encircled by ghostly arms
of long ago love...........zendo
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