within walls of hope
just a chance meeting with you
broken and ignored
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as i sit here with
a heart belonging to you
broken and ignored
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thoughts, unwanted, find
me, but i remain for you
broken and ignored

One sided affair
My impassioned emotions
Overlooked by you....moon4rent

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Secluded cabin -
My hermitage so barren
now that I've met her. -RAS
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seeking emptiness
secluded cabin is filled
with soft thoughts of her.............zendo
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noose hangs from rafters
in dark secluded cabin
where thoughts just linger
xcalibur
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I hope we're speaking figuratively here...???
.
submitting to that
cold embrace may give surcease
but admits defeat
.
-RAS
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Christ, am i so vain
or worthless her empty eyes
can cut me this deep?
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depth of hurt, for some
intrusive, left there to bleed
the life out of me
xcalibur
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When eyes cut deep, it's
not for vanity. Worthless
souls don't bleed for love.
--eritain
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(BTW, excellent repetition use. Cold, but she's not past feeling, more like she doesn't want to feel. Well-done.) -e