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Poem Number 727
fly unzipped as if
not to impede warm fingers
soft writhing beauty
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ok, i had this posted in another room and obviously it offended someone, (it was closed almost immediately after i put it up) I've swapped one word to make it a little less racy for you more sensitive viewers...........love, mela
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determined fingers
make silken marrionettes
sway in ecstasy........TMM
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