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Poem Number 708
rocking back and forth
pleasure moans escaping me
what fun dildos are!
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Ok Anon, wasnt expecting this ending, but it made me laugh out loud!....DaRedQueen
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I did'nt quite have the frames right and only saw the first two lines then scrolled down and POW oh what a laugh came out....m4r
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Really funny.....and true :)......rubyredldy
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hmmmmmm........ruby??..........nevermind........zendo
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oops...good wine :)......rubyredldy
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merlot??.........zendo
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What's this with you and merlot, sugar?
~O~ Coyote ~O~
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just a very good wine.......zendo
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