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Haiku - Three


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Poem Number 663
Sun bursts through gray clouds
Fingers of light cross the sky
Natures art work


Commentary:
Anon: You deserve "a hit in the head" "a kind word" "a smile" and "A
Great Big Thank You" for this very beautiful haiku. "I think you got it."
GrandmaThing
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Sorry, I forgot. May you know love.(((Anon)))
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Oh pity timid one
Why hide as if in shame
Behind a false name
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I wrote this plus the one above. My true identity hides within this ones
lines. Can you guess my name? Thank you for the positive critique Grandma
I appreciate them.
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Opto -Gottcha
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I just ain't as clever as I thought I was. Oh well.
opto
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Opto: Whether you think yourself clever or no, we love you and your
being here.--GrandmaThing--May you know that love.
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