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Poem Number 655
screaming, "I won't stay!"
inveighing while inviting
warmly clutching arms


Commentary:
I dont know what to think, its all greek to me, but
I do believe turning 64 is what i caught on to
unless you've not fired that cross-eyed proof reader
of yours ( and many of us as well) Is Happy Birthday in order. May you collect as many social security checks as there are government debts!!!!...39
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"inveighing" protesting strongly--screaming she won't stay is in opposition
to her clutching his arm inviting her stay. You're right about the birthday
it was the 12th. Wasn't sure if I should keep 63 or move on. Haven't asked yahoo
yahoo if I can change it-or could I just change it here? GrandmaThing--
May you know love.
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Yahoo? No, probably you'd need to make a new account. Here? Oh yeah. In fact, as a duly (self-)appointed Young Whippersnapper, I give you permission to debit your number to 62 or whatever. Whatever you do, you'll always be my favorite Thing. --eritain
"Aging is mandatory. Maturity is optional." -- Heath Westover, youth advisor, on the occasion of eritain's appropriately-lamented eighteenth
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Eritain: Thanks for the vote of confidence. Have decided to humble
myself and use 64 but can "we" forget we're getting older and "fly with
Peter Pan"? My girls both love the theme song from Toys"R"Us--"I don't
wanna grow up." I wonder why? Have some love today(((Eritain))).
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Oh, Thing! [({ThisThing_6n})]^n -e
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Come on, Thing! 64! You're just a baby! Why, I shall soon be 65 - now there's
AGE! Be brave, Baby Sister, and just remember that there is much to accomplish
after 65, but you gotta get there first. I'll beat you to the top of the
coconut tree! (to quote from a famous book.) Love always, even if you are
just a kid, Lida Jo from Idaho
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