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Poem Number 626
over head wires full
baby flock on ground learning
migration formations
Commentary:
oooh.. I have seen this..You just feel like you want to give them a hand sometimes.. Alice..
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This is one of your best, Baby Sister! Well honed. Lida Jo
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Ditto to both comments above. Makes one picture a little league game, the
parents in the grandstand cheering on their offspring's efforts. Nicely,
nicely done. PG
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PG:
picture little league
parents in grandstand cheering
their offsping's efforts
......Thanks. GrandmaThing--May you know love.
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