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Poem Number 570
He tracks me
following the trail of blood
I, the wounded deer


Commentary:
QuicheMarie::Hi love!!!!!!Where ya been? We missed you much. Nice haiku.
You haven't forgotten how to write them. Tell the girls we miss hearing
from them , too. Boy, it's great. Opto and Lida Jo are back, sometimes
PG drops in from outer space, and now you're here too. Thank Eritain for
his concern. May we know love here!!!MommaThing--you starting college?
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hey quiche!!!! Welcome back!!!! Yes hunting season will be here next month, thankfully I`ve never wounded one and had to track it down. I`m not a sport hunter,if I kill it i`m gonna eat it............39
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Well my friend I see you haven't lost the knack as stated above. It is indeed
good to see your name here again. Well written. Thanks for bringing me back.
sam
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Quiche: I hope this is a comment on a past experience that you've had
time to heal from; if not, get a restraining order and a friend to guard
the door. Strong, vivid and scary. PG
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